pretty good job, n pts r nicely made. it could be a little longer though, cuz i liked the jokes :). oh and the bleeping sounds r too loud, i can barely make out the speech but if i turn up the volume the bleeps get too loud. maybe you could look into that next time?
meh I made the beeps in audacity really, nothing special, but next time I'll try my best :)
it DOES suck like you.
to all the reviewers who said this was the crappiest, worst shit they've seen,
just check out his other submissions.
Seriously, for God's sake take down these stupid flashes and save yourself the embarrassment.
could be more polished, but then im just nitpickin
it was a great animation, lots of effort put into it. but the later action sequences actually looked more polished than the beginning, strangely. Usually people would make the models in the action sequences simpler. The initial models when the planes were about to take off looked a bit rough, and the wheels were abit weird too.
coming from a guy who's played too many air combat simulators for his own good, i'd say a tip is to study actual dogfight tactics and incorporate them into your movie if ur doing a dogfighting scene. currently its a little off, like how that guy managed to evade radar, and needing a visual, and how u can fire a missile to hit another missile.
other than that, great job as always, logfish!
great job, seeing some improvements
The commander of the fleet looks better in this sequel, less cheesy and more serious looking. the debris field was a great idea, and helps the suspension of disbelief. gone is the car-alarm sound, and this one at least sounds more believable.
The red globes of stuff at the start of the flash. i think its supposed to be blood? could definitely be improved. and the drawing of the eye was pretty bad. differed from the rest of it totally.
You really didn't like the car alarm, lol. Thanks for your pointers - space blood with flash is difficult.
WHAT!! U KILLED THE FUNNY GUY!! WITH NO CHANCE OF BRINGING HIM BACK!! N0000. ah well.
He's going to come back as a frankenstein terran dragoon
to the guy before me,(joeboudreau) u must be blind n deaf, or haven't seen past episodes.
firstly, why dont u stop being a smartass. try making the sounds URSELF and see how it turns out. eh?? this guy doesnt have blizzard's budget! and it'll probably be worse anyway. the music came from the marine's music gun anyway.
secondly, if protoss don't know english, how the hell do u suppose ur mission objectives r given to u when u play the game?
thirdly, ur a fucking moron for not noticing that his friends DID say that that was NOT one shot, and he fired four times in a SINGLE trigger-squeeze.
fourth, when ur in a vehicle and its careening wildy around, u fucking HOLD ON. AND if u CARED to notice, the background was DIFFERENT. AND u can't prove that the vehicle wasnt falling forward for that duration of time. think about the author's efforts, idiot.
Lastly, lots of people care about starcraft. they're called gamers, and they have lots of lives...we don't need to get one. now for a nice big FUCK YOU. :)
P.S: if u didnt care about starcraft, how did u know about the protoss? stupid.
I'm sure he was kidding but thanks for that rant hehe - i think his 'why would they speak english' gave it away!
u rock man!! i always hated xiao xiao's stuck up arrogance. Anyway, good portrayal of the execution. Very movie-like if you ignore the bad graphics. DO MORE!!
to the person1, don't be such a jackass thinking ur so safe in ur little haven of the USA. major countries just need to boycott the USA and its economy will fail. Other countries depend on the USA, and so does the USA depend on other countries. And who can predict what will happen?
some of the best i've seen
sorry i posted this review in some other entry earlier. here u go.
this piece contained some really fantastic parts, some average parts, and few problems. i'll give a brief rundown as i replay the movie:
First problem I saw was definitely the ACT 1 sign. the signs cut the action terribly. i recommend naming each scene in the scene select that identifies it well, ie. screenshots, instead of referring to the acts.
the second problem i noticed is that the street lamps dont light up at night! the cool reflection of the streetlamps off the car was very realistic, but here the challenge is for you to do that, but with streetlights on instead.
the third problem i noticed was the character's glasses. they kept flashing in a loop, which was quite annoying. especially noticeable when he was looking away from the mad guy with the string thing in the dark room.
a great effect i noticed was the tilting and changing of angles during the driving, and of course, the simultaneous shots from different angles of the lighting of the cigarette! totally classic.
the smoke effects were good too, but the exploding heads were abit too unneccessary.
for the fight scene, his hand actions were too unrealistic, and the it is the same sound so it gets boring after awhile. also, please show him dodging the bullets! sure, he's cool, but not invincible to a hail of bullets frm a freaking machine gun!! maybe u can make the other guy look freaked out so he misses?
sometimes the character only needs 1 shot from his gun to make the scene look cooler. there is no need for him to fire off the same number of bullets (and they are a whole shitload of em at once).
now for the car chase scene. regrettably the action was stopped by ACT 3 sign. the car chase itself...what more can i say? AMAZING. evrything 3D is, in mi opinion. fantastic angles, n veri movie like. i loved it! the best of the 3 acts.
what i would have written if i didnt have the time:
cool. make more.
some of the best, and some of the norm
Are you reviewing for this movie? :p
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